
We need to stand in saintly places
the way our body needs food to not topple over
We need to go there and find nearness there
even just a rude rock-strewn place where something
saintly took place or is taking place
tombs in giant sepulchers or a rude
rock-strewn place you can feel under your
feet or at the base of the heart the
non-physical saintliness of a real person in whom
God was by that person’s pleasing pleased
and stand there in its crystal waters rushing
past our ears and bathing our limbs the way
careful mothers of all creatures bathe their young
in the same way really we need to
find and stand in saintly places in this world
or stand with saintly ones and
stand with them for a time or for all time
and once found not ever leave their sainted precincts
in time or out of time
but stand with them
in their saintly places or those
who have gone before whose places are still
palpably alive the way even other live places
are not but these places are refuges and
refueling places not known anywhere
else on earth or with any other practitioners
and to stand in the bounty of a saintly place is
indescribable but evident if not then
then now in its great effect and the continuous affect
it has on us to
stand just once or have stood for even a small time
in space
in saintly places
6 Comments
January 9, 2007 at 7:50 PM
Salaam Alaikum brother Moore,
Wow! This is an honor both to receive this comment from you and to have posted your poem. It is one of my favorite poems from your poetry collection. I will be checking out your blog and website.
Thanks so much for visiting our blog, and we hope you will continue to visit. May Allah bless you for your poetic efforts and inspiring Muslims and helping them in their faith.
Barak Allahu Feek
January 9, 2007 at 2:25 PM
Thank you for posting this poem of mine… it’s nice to see it’s getting some circulation, and resonant replies… Please check out my blog: http://ecstaticxchange.wordpress.com, where there are many new poems, and archive poetry website: http://www.danielmoorepoetry.com. And may Allah grant us all saintly places within and without us…
October 25, 2006 at 3:18 PM
Thanks for the comments and link Dawood. I will be reading the poem very soon.
Wa Salaam
October 25, 2006 at 10:13 AM
Thats beautiful. Try this one out it almost made cry when i read it.
http://myspeak.info/axisofevil.html
Thanks
Dawood
October 25, 2006 at 10:00 AM
I heartily agree Karin! We need it now more than ever. I think people are searching for something to fulfill them spiritually, but many are searching in the wrong things.
Thanks for stopping by my friend
October 25, 2006 at 12:18 AM
Thant’s beautiful!! You’re SO RIGHT … we desperately need these kind of places in this crazy world – just peole don’t wake up to realize that! We may have changed – but our souls didn’t – and are hurting badly!
Thanks so much for sharing dear friend!!